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Nice description of the movie. Pay close attention to where to add "the" before nouns, and also make sure to stay in the same tense (past) throughout a passage.
My favourite film
Some A few days ago i had watched a film. It was advicedrecommended by my friend. The film is called " September's a little problem"( bir kucuk Eylul meselesi). It is a Turkish film. The film is about love, about hea girl and boy. They are very different from each other. The girl was born and grown grew up in town and the boy was born and lived in the country. A The girl was a very successful lady, she hasd her own business. And the boy hasn'thad no famiy, he lived alone. He didn't work. The boy could draw and earned money by from it. He understood animals better than people.They both are very beautiful. Once the girl comecame to the country, where lives the boy lived. They meetmet each other. The boy fell in love inwith the girl. And then he began to make love to her. She took him in by the hand. They spent a lot of time together. The boy thought that it is was a real love, but unfortunately. L the last times girl bigan began to feall in love to him, but she understood it very late. She understood itfigured it out when she left the boy., country, when She had an accident and when after accident she will have shaking shokwent into shock(?). When she will remembered and understand that she loved him, she know heard that he had drowned in the sea.
I love this film very much. I was angry on at the girl. Because she is gualty responsible for the on death of such a beautiful, simple and talented boy.
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