Please help me to correct this

It would be appreciated if you keep in your mind in thinking of me as just one of the men who love girls while reading it.

What kind of boy do you want to go out with?

Some guy who has a great sense of humor... Some dude who has a natural flair for giving pleasure with some words even if we are not sure of if it is flattering or admiring.

There's no certain answer for each girl as there are a lot of guys in the world. Talking about this will never end.

So I will change the question just a little, What do you want your boyfriend and husband to be?

Yes, your response will be like 'be what'? But please don't be a liar. I know you have the experience to urge your man to change his behavior.

Stop drinking all the night... Let go of your anger... why didn't you clean out? ....

but the only thing I can be sure of is you don't have the talent to change someone and you also don't need to do.

Given that you received the package you purchased, you need to decide if you will get a refund or use it.

Yes, you can choose the option to renovate it and fix it if there's some problem but you have to deserve to get being paid.

But almost all of girls who try to get their boy to be better don't only get being paid but waste their time.

because their dedication is supposed to be accepted by guys as a mother not as a lover.

We love our mother but most of guys don't focus their view on their mother but on a new girl.

that's why I'm saying you have to choose one and letting him go his own way or just leave him.

Red = errors, Green = more natural. Some of the language is still a little unnatural - but some of that is hard to translate culturally.