our ecologically footprint
I have to do a presentation about our ecologically footprint, I would be very gladly about good corrections.
Today I'm going to hold a presentation about our ecologically footprint.
When we use fossil fuels to produce this much energy, we send a lot of carbon dioxide (CO2) to the atmosphere.
Carbon Dioxide is one of the greenhouse gases that is guilty of cause the global warming. The global warming means extremly climate changes. This has serious effects on our living-quality everywhere in the future and in some places now to. Some places are going to be more wet and other places getting drier and hotter.
Many plants and animals are in great danger, because their food and their homes are disappearing. The sum that you create is called carbon footprint. Every time, when you use any gadget for instance a mobile phone/ cellphone your carbon emissions gets bigger and bigger. In page 29 you can see a pie chart of pupil in the United Kingdom, how many they produce (in our book). The USA produces 5987 million tonnes of CO2, China 4770, Russia 1559, Germany 873 and the United Kingdom 565 million tonnes. We saw the warnings of the environment, many storms and dry periods are crossing the lands. The last great civilizations saw similar warnings like the roman empire. They were blind and they didn't do anything. We are making the same but we are not in this position much longer. Someday we will change our living-type I don't know how, maybe constrained from the environment, maybe from our government arranged if it's not to late.
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Our Ecologically Footprint (titles in capital letters)
I have to do a presentation about our ecologically footprint, I would be very gladly about to receive (good) corrections.
Today I'm going to hold give ( I am presuming you are presenting) a presentation about our ecologically footprint.
When we use fossil fuels to produce this much energy, we send a lot of carbon dioxide (CO2) into the atmosphere.
Carbon dioxide is one of the greenhouse gases that is guilty of causes the global warming. The Global warming means extremely climate changes. This has will have serious effects on our living-quality everywhere in the future everywhere and in some places it is having an effect now to. Some places are going to be (will become - instead of "are going to be") more wetter and other places getting (you could add: will become) drier and hotter.
Many plants and animals are in great danger, because their food and their homes are disappearing. The sum impact that you create is called your carbon footprint. Every time, when you use any gadget (device), for instance a mobile phone/ cellphone, your carbon emissions gets bigger and bigger (increases - rather than gets bigger and bigger). In On page 29 you can see a pie chart of pupils in the United Kingdom, how many much they produce (in our book). The USA produces 5,987 million tonnes of CO2, China 4,770, Russia 1,559, Germany 873 and the United Kingdom 565 (million tonnes). We saw see the environmental warnings of the environment, many storms and dry periods are crossing the lands. The last great civilizations, such as the Roman Empire, saw similar warnings like the roman empire. They were blind and they didn't do anything. We are making the same mistake but we are will not be in this position much longer. Someday we will change how we live, our living-type I don't know how, maybe constrained (? I am not sure what you mean here? ) from the environment, maybe from our government arranged if it's not too late.
Please say it, when you know something I could also write to this topic.
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