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Saturday Yesterday I woke up at 7:00 am my mother brought breakfast to my bed, I ate bread and I drank tea. In the sky the sun looked like a shy light, then my friend texted me on whatsapp to invite me to her house at the afternoon because she would celebrate a party for his son. I didn't want to go out but she is a special friend for me and I decided to go finally, so... I took a shower and I thought during many time which clothes I would wear... I wanted to look very good due to my friend's family is like my own one, then I made up and I was ready to go when suddenly started to rain... Oh no!!! I had to wait for one hour, after I went to buy a gift and I arrived to my friend's house one hour and a half later. I was very happy to see her family, I ate a delicious cake and I talked with her for two hours. I'm grateful with God to permit that yesterday was a beautiful and special day. Life is a great gift and I hope to live every day like my last one.

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Saturday

Yesterday I woke up at 7:00 am. My mother brought breakfast to my bed, I ate bread and I drank tea. In the sky the sun looked like a shy light, then my friend texted me on whatsapp to invite me to her house in the afternoon because she would celebrate a party for her son.

I didn't want to go out but she is a special friend for me and I decided to go finally, so... I took a shower and I thought a lot about which clothes I would wear... I wanted to look very good due to my friend's family is like my own one, then I did my make up and I was ready to go when suddenly it started to rain... Oh no!!! I had to wait for one hour, after that, (better then,) I went to buy a gift and I arrived at my friend's house one hour and a half later. I was very happy to see her family, I ate a delicious cake and I talked with her for two hours.

I'm grateful that God permitted yesterday to be a beautiful and special day. Life is a great gift and I hope to live every day like my last one.

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Saturday

Yesterday I woke up at 7:00 am. My mother brought breakfast to my bed. I ate bread and I drank tea. In the sky the sun looked like a shy light, then my friend texted me on whatsapp to invite me to her house in the afternoon because she was having a celebration for her son.

I didn't want to go out but she is a special friend of mine and I finally decided to go, so... I took a shower and spent much time thinking about which clothes I would wear... I wanted to look very good because my friend's family is like my own, then I got made up and I was ready to go when suddenly it started to rain... Oh no!!! I had to wait for an hour, after I went to buy a gift and I arrived to my friend's house one hour and a half later. I was very happy to see her family, I ate a delicious cake and I talked with her for two hours.

I'm grateful to God for permitting yesterday to be a beautiful and special day. Life is a great gift and I hope to live every day like my last one.

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very good :)

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