qiuhui's notebook entry: Jan 06, 2011
to improve my writing skill,i decide to write my first dialy here.so i hope that, if you look at this,you can help me correct my grammer mistake and the wrong words.these days are so cold,and i shound prepare my finnal examination in the school.for the cold weather,i do not want to go outsides,but if i stay in my living room,i will not calm down for review my lessons.and what i will do is that opening the computer and surfing.haha,you may think that i lack of self-regulating.ye,i think so.five days later,i can go home for the holiday,and i can see my lovely family members and also i can play with my good friends who long time no see.then i feel exciting and expecting.so how about you?
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qiuhui's notebook entry: Jan 06, 2011
to improve my writing skill,i decide to write my first diary here.so i hope that, if you look at this,you can help me correct my grammer mistake and the wrong words.these days are so cold,and i shound prepare my finnal examination in the school.for the cold weather,i do not want to go outsides,but if i stay in my living room,i will not calm down for review my lessons.and what i will do is that opening the computer and surfing.haha,you may think that i lack of self-regulating.ye,i think so.five days later,i can go home for the holiday,and i can see my lovely family members and also i can play with my good friends who long time no see.then i feel exciting and expecting.so how about you?Want to progress faster?
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