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My flat.
My flat is on the outskirts of the city, on the third floor. It's very small - there is only one room - but it's quite cosy and light. In my flat there is a small hall, one room (it's a living-room, and a bedroom, and a study... :), a kitchen, a bathroom and a toilet. There is a hoger [I don't know this word. Hanger? Closet?] with some clothes on the left wool in side of the hall. In the kitchen there is a table. There are three stools next to the table. Also there is a fridge on in the far left distant corner, next to the window, and a cooker stove [could also be an oven, or a crockpot, or a slow cooker] opposite the fridge, on the right.
If you enter in the room you can will see [I would write "find"] some furniture there. In the left corner there is a desk. There is a computer on the desk and near to the desk theer there is a chair. On To the right of the door there is a wardrobe and on to the left there is a baby bed [a cradle? A twin bed?]. Along distant wall, opposite the child's bed, there is a sofa. On the floor there is a carpet. On In the distant far right corner there is an enter entry to the balcony.
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Very nicely written, your flat is a lot like mine. We usually say "far right" or "far left" rather than "distant." Some of the word choices were unusual, so I wrote alternatives in blue.
My Flat.
My flat is on the outskirts of the city, on the third floor. It's very small - there is only one room - but it's quite cosy and light. In my flat There is a small hall, one room (it's a living-room, and a bedroom, and a study... :), a kitchen, a bathroom and a toilet. There is a hoger closet/cupboard with some for clothes on the left wall wool in the hall. In the kitchen there is a table. There are with three stools next to the table. Also, there is a fridge in the left distant far corner, next to the window, and a cooker opposite the fridge, on the right.
If you enter in the room you can see some furniture there. In the left corner there is a desk. There is a computer on the desk and near to the desk theer is a chair. On To the right of the door there is a wardrobe and on the left there is a baby bed. Along the far distant wall, opposite the child's bed, there is a sofa. On the floor there is a carpet. In the distant far right corner there is the door an enter to the balcony.
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