Corrections · 6
Today
Today is Saturday, so I woke up later than usual. I had a breakfast with my husband and then did the dishes and housework. Then After that, I met a delivery man with goods, which I had booked ordered. Thereafter, Next, I had a lunch with my husband and then began to do my English hometask of <--Either "homework" or just the word "tasks" should go here. "Hometask" is OK, but is rarely used in Amercan English. English and translate some professional texts.
Jerry (English Teacher/Tutor)
Today
Today is Saturday, so I woke up later. I had a breakfast with my husband and did the dishes and housework. Then, I met a delivery man with who brought goods*, which I had ordered booked.
(*I would either say packages or specify the type of goods. It wouldn't be natural to just say goods here For example 'Then I met a delivery man who brought the soap that I ordered the day before)
Thereafter, I had a lunch with my husband and then began to do my hometask English homework and translate professional texts.
Sounds like a busy day!
Corrections in red. Stylistics in blue.
Today
Today is Saturday, so I woke up later than usual. I had a breakfast with my husband, and did the dishes and some housework. Afterwards, I briefly met with a delivery man who was delivering goods, which I had ordered. Thereafter, I had a lunch with my husband, and then began to do my English hometask of English and translation of professional texts.
Use "book" when you are making reservations, such as a hotel reservation, a table in a restaurant, or airplane or train tickets. Use "order" when you wish to purchase goods.
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