Unbelievable

I'm on the train to work on the and it's crowded train as usual. There is not much space between the people, little room, so it's easy to bump each into each one another ther on the train. There is a woman standing behind me, and she is putting on her makeup on the train which is totally in public. Where is the are her morals? It's unbelievable! :O

Where is the morals?  "morals" is not the right word to use here as it's not immoral to put makeup on in  public. A better word would be "Dignity"

I hope this helps!

Jerry (Teacher/Tutor)

Original:

Unbelievable

I'm on the train to work on the crowded train as usual. There is not much space between people, so it's easy to bump each each other on the train. There is a woman standing behind me, and she isputting on her make up on the train which is totally public. Where is the moral? It's unbelievable :O

Corrections:

Unbelievable,

I'm on the train to work, which is crowded as usual. There is not much space between people, so it's easy to bump into each other on the train. There is a woman standing behind me and she is putting her makeup on on the train, in public. Where is the morality? It's unbelievable :O