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My best friend My best friend name is Maude, she is 35 years old. I meet her Australia because we are both Jornalist. She was born in Australia but she lives in New York now. She has been leaving there for 10 years because she got a job there as a writer for New york Times. She is an econimist. She is single and has a boyfriend. She lives in Manhatan inaa huge apartament. The apartment has four bedrooms, one living room, three bathrooms, a big kictken.She doesn't have any pets. I''ve visited her namy times and she seems to be very happy there.

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My best friend

My best friend's name is Maude. She is 35 years old. I meet her in Australia because we are both Journalists. She was born in Australia but she lives in New York now. She has been living there for 10 years ever since she got a job there as a writer for The New York Times. She is an econoimist. She is single and has a boyfriend. She lives in Manhattan in a huge apartment. The apartment has four bedrooms, one living room, three bathrooms, and a big kitchen.She doesn't have any pets. I've visited her many times and she seems to be very happy there.

 

 

.....she got a job there as a writer for.....  The "there" in this phrase is not wrong, but it is not needed

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Bom dia Ellen, A good effort. Just be careful with "single", which would mean that she doesn't have a partner. She has a boyfriend, so she isn't married, that's all. Also, "one living room" might be better just as "a living room". One is a number. To give an example, "I have one friend." Only one? I have A friend... Saludos, Simón.
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My best friend

My best friend's name is Maude, and she is 35 years old. I met her in Australia because we are both journalists. She was born in Australia but she lives in New York now. She has been living there for 10 years because she got a job as a writer for The New York Times. She is an economist. She is single and has a boyfriend. She lives in Manhattan in a huge apartment. The apartment has four bedrooms, one living room, three bathrooms, and a big kitchen. She doesn't have any pets. I've visited her many times and she seems to be very happy there.


Good job!!! :)

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