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Today at 2:00 Today at 2:00 I woke up and the sky had been raining a lot it was cloudy so I washed my face and brushed my tooth and then I took a shower and got out of the bathroom and ablutioned to be ready for praying so I finished all of that and I went to the kitchen and made a coffee and I drank it all and went outside to watch the rain please if there's any mistake in my writing just correction it for me thanks.

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Today at 2:00

Today at 2:00 I woke up. and the sky It had been raining a lot and it was cloudy. so I washed my face, and brushed my tooth teeth, and then I took a shower, and got out of the bathroom, and ablutioned to be ready for praying to pray. so I finished all of that, and I went to the kitchen, and made a some coffee, and I drank it all. and Then, I went outside to watch the rain


Please if there's any mistake in my writing just correction it for me thanks.

Don't link over two clauses by "and." Just use commas and link the final clause with "and." You can also eliminate the pronoun when doing this, as long as it remains the same. "I did this and I did that and then I did another thing" becomes "I did this, did that, and then I did another thing."

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