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please cry in english, baby ccc's notebook entry: Jan 02, 2011 I didnt had a good rest yestday night,maybe you can ask me why?what happened?yeah,i will answer your questions,talk my adventure with you.That Because of a baby,nearby my house.The baby was crying all the time on the night,and his/her parents were tried to Make quiet the baby,the noise disturbed my dream,weaked me up and contiued a long time. I couldnt stood it any more,so i got up,and Knocked the Couples’door,said to them:"sorry,bother you,i think i can have your baby quieted,please let me a try,ok?"Then, i approached the baby,looked into the baby's eyes,"oh,my little angel,why you cry so sadly?is someone ate your food without your allow?or you want to Prove your voice as well as vitas?or worry about arrival of the 2012? dont cry any more please,if you Insist on it,please do it in english ok?you know ,i learning the english language recently,if you cry in english ,i think you can help me improve my english listening." When i finished my words,the baby was quieted,staried at me strange ,her\his emotion seemed to doubt that iam the man ate her\his food.i swear iam not,but the baby not cry any more at least.so,i think ,maybe she/he dont know how to cry in english,hahah~~~~~ please help me modify my composition,thank you very much!

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please cry in english, baby ccc's notebook entry: Jan 02, 2011

I didn't sleep well last night. You may ask why? what happened? I will answer your question and talk you through my adventure. There was a baby who was crying all night and their parents were trying to quieten the baby. The noise disturbed and weakened my sleep  for a long time.

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I got up, knocked on the couples door and said to them, "sorry to bother you, may I try to quieten your baby?'. Then, I approached the baby and looked into it's eyes and said, "oh, my little angel, why are you crying so sadly? Did someone eat your food without your permision?* or are you worrying about the arrival of the year 2012? please don't cry any more, if you insist, please do it in English ok? You know, I'm currently learning English, so if you cry in English I think you can help me improve my listening skills in English."

When I finished talking, the baby was quiet and stared at me in a strange way. The baby's emotion seemed to doubt that I was the person who ate their food. I swear didn't, but at least the baby didn't cry anymore. I thought, maybe the baby couldn't cry in English. Hahaha.


Please help me modify my composition, thank you very much!



*(or you want to Prove your voice as well as vitas) I didn't quite understand what you mean by this. Overall, it's a good composition. Keep trying and you'll improve drastically.

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