Healthy food

Yestarday I read an article about the healthy food and North American people.
In Canada and the United States, usually the people eat hamburgers, french fries, hot dogs, canned, and generally fast food, the American diet is high in salt, sugar and fat. However that is chainging, the people are beginning to eat healthy food, because they know that fast food produces cholesterol and health problems.
The North American people are eating more vegetables fruit, less fries, less junk food and moreover they know the importance  of practicing exercise in their daily life.

Healthy Food

Yesterday I read an article about healthy food in North America.
In Canada and the United states people usually eat hamburgers, french fries, hot dogs, canned (what?), and generally fast food. The American diet is high in salt, sugar and fat, but that is changing:  people are beginning to eat healthy food, because they know that fast food raises cholesterol and creates health problems.
North American people are eating more vegetables, fruit, less fries, less junk food, and moreover they know the importance of practicing exercise in daily life.

Remember, the definite article, "the", is not used when talking about something in general, eg, people in general, not a specific group of people.

Place names have capital letters.

The difference between health and healthy: healthy is an adjective, (saludable); health indicates what type of problems, (de salud).

Importance is a noun; important is an adjective.

Notice that "practicing" is spelled with a "c", according to American English. In British English, the verb is spelled with an "s".

Healthy food

Yestarday I read an article about the healthy foods in North American people.
In Canada and the United States usually the people usually eat hamburgers, french fries, hot dogs, canned foods, and fast food in general fast food. The American diet is high in salt, sugar, and fat, but that is chainging. The people are becoming starting to eat healthier. food healthier becouse They know that fast foods produce cholesterol and health problems.
The people of North America people are eating more vegetables and fruit while putting away less the fries and less junk food. Moreover, they now know the importance to practice of exercise in the daily life.

Jerry (English tutor)