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My graduation trip(short version) Today I'd like to share my memory of graduation trip. It was not so much a fun trip as an adventure. I decided to go to Middle East countries as a graduation trip. Why middle east? I didn't want to visit popular areas for Japanese,such as Asia and Europe. I wanted to have exciting experiences which people never had. First I left for Egypt and spent Egypt about 2weeks. while staying I went through various things, most of which were troubles. then I moved to Jordan to see the most famous ancient ruin. After that, I visited Israel and I was exposed to two totally diferrent cultures. One is jewish, and the other is Palestinian. Also, I found a utopia for me. it's Tel Aviv, the second most populous city in Israel. I really liked the city. my final distination was London,where my friend studied abroad at that time. London was certaionly fun, but I already had passed the peak of my adventure. I just chilled and enjoyed urban life in London. That is just a sumally. I may write the details if I feel like it.

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My graduation trip(short version)

Today I'd like to share a memory of my graduation trip. It was not so much a fun trip as an adventure.

I decided to go to the Middle Eastern countries (or just ...go to the Middle East as a...) as a graduation trip. Why the Middle East? I didn't want to visit popular areas for Japanese, such as Asia and (or) Europe. I wanted to have exciting experiences which most people have never had.

First I left for Egypt and spent about 2weeks in Egypt. While there I went through various things, most of which were trouble. Then I moved on (Just moved sounds like 引っ越した)to Jordan to see their (世界一じゃないね) most famous ancient ruin. After that, I visited Israel and I was exposed to two totally diferrent cultures. One is jewish, and the other is Palestinian. Also, I found a utopia for me. it's Tel Aviv, the second most populated city in Israel. I really liked the city. (or ...the city in Israel with the second highest populous.)

My final distination was London, where my friend studied abroad at that time. London was certainly fun, but I already had (たぶん had already) passed the peak of my adventure. I just chilled and enjoyed urban life in London.

That is just a summary. I may write the details if I feel like it.

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