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My fisrt entry in the notebook
Today I was in a little town of in Toledo to compete in a bike race. It was very funny fun!! There was a lof lot of rocks and the rains of yesterday yesterday's rain made very much a lot of mud in on the ground. Fortunately the race happened went without incidents and I could was able to finish. My only objetive objective was to finish the race because I went with other friends and we went like as a team. (We) began together and finished together. (Sometimes you can eliminate the pronoun to sound informal, which would work as the way you did it, but just to be sure.)
Another short note: "funny" = gracioso; "fun" = divertido
Your English is excellent! You were able to express yourself clearly and use some colloquial structures, which is impressive. Keep it up!
My first entry in the notebook
Today I was in a the little town of Toledo to compete in a bike race. It was very funny (or "a lot of fun")!! There was were a lot of rocks, and the yesterday's rains of yesterday made very much a lot of mud in on the ground. Fortunately the race happened without any incidents, and I could finish. My only objective was to finish (or "finishing") the race, because I went with other friends and we went like as a team. We Began started together and finished together.
My fisrt entry in the notebook
Today I was in a the little town of Toledo to compete in a bike race. It was great fun! very funny!! There was were a lof of rocks and the rains of yesterday had made the ground very much muddy in the ground. Fortunately there were no incidents/accidents during the race happened without incidents and I could finished. My only objective was to finish the race because I was with went with other friends and we went like a team. We began together and finished together.
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