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My first Note : Mission Hi everyone. I'm ready to go a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board(circuit) that It is an datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know dataloger what it is.I must to go to Sanandaj(a city in Iran) for test it. Datalogger is an electronics device that use for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter. I'm moving tonight and I think to arrive there around tomorrow morning.I hope to won't be any problem. The weather is not good and It's maybe that we encounter to snowing . I will describe it tomorrow. see you soon

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My first Note : Mission

Hi everyone. I'm ready to go on a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board (circuit) that It is an called a datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know what a dataloger what it is. I must to go to Sanandaj (a city in Iran) for to test it. A datalogger is an electronics device that is used for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight, and I think to I will arrive there around sometime tomorrow morning. I hope to there won't be any problems. The weather is not good and It's maybe that we might encounter to snowing .
I will describe it tomorrow.
See you soon.


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Will arrive around 8:00 in the morning.  Will arrive sometime in the morning.  Will arrive sometime tomorrow morning.


This is not my field, so I don't know about the capitalization of: az Loadcell or Pressure Transmitter.


We may encounter snow.   We might encounter snow.  It might snow.  :)


Please let me know if you have any questions or if you don't agree with any of the changes.


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My first Note : Mission

Hi everyone. I'm ready to go a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board(circuit) that It is an datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know  what a datalogger is.I must go  to Sanandaj(a city in Iran) to  test it. A Datalogger is an electronics device that  is used  for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight and I think  I will arrive there around tomorrow morning.I hope  there won't be any problem. The weather is not good and  we may encounter snow .
I will describe it tomorrow.
see you soon

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My first Note : Mission

Hi everyone. I'm ready to go on a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board (circuit) that called datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know what dataloger is. I must go to Sanandaj (a city in Iran) to test it. A datalogger is an electronic device that use for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight and I think I will arrive sometime tomorrow morning.I hope there won't be any problems. The weather is not good and we might encounter snow.
I will describe it tomorrow.
See you soon.

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