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My first Note : Mission
Hi everyone. I'm ready to go on a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board (circuit) that It is an called a datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know what a dataloger what it is. I must to go to Sanandaj (a city in Iran) for to test it. A datalogger is an electronics device that is used for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight, and I think to I will arrive there around sometime tomorrow morning. I hope to there won't be any problems. The weather is not good and It's maybe that we might encounter to snowing .
I will describe it tomorrow.
See you soon.
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Will arrive around 8:00 in the morning. Will arrive sometime in the morning. Will arrive sometime tomorrow morning.
This is not my field, so I don't know about the capitalization of: az Loadcell or Pressure Transmitter.
We may encounter snow. We might encounter snow. It might snow. :)
Please let me know if you have any questions or if you don't agree with any of the changes.
Azalea
My first Note : Mission
Hi everyone. I'm ready to go a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board(circuit) that It is an datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know what a datalogger is.I must go to Sanandaj(a city in Iran) to test it. A Datalogger is an electronics device that is used for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight and I think I will arrive there around tomorrow morning.I hope there won't be any problem. The weather is not good and we may encounter snow .
I will describe it tomorrow.
see you soon
My first Note : Mission
Hi everyone. I'm ready to go on a work mission tonight. I've designed a new electronic board (circuit) that called datalogger. I know maybe some of you don't know what dataloger is. I must go to Sanandaj (a city in Iran) to test it. A datalogger is an electronic device that use for logging data from sensors such az Loadcell or LVDT or Pressure Transmitter.
I'm moving tonight and I think I will arrive sometime tomorrow morning.I hope there won't be any problems. The weather is not good and we might encounter snow.
I will describe it tomorrow.
See you soon.
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