Teach me English.

WOW, ... today is so cold.
Yesterday I planned to climb the mountains around The West Lake with my roommates, but unfortunately, today it has been rainning all day and it's very cold outside. So we had  have to cancel the plan and stay in the  at dormitory. Today is so boring. Now I have a new plan, I want to go to Binjiang tomorrow, because there are places that sell  where has many delicious and cheap snacks. snakes , I must will be very happy, because I am a glutton, so I am longing  Let me hope for tomorrow.

I think my English is so poor after I have read what I have written when I finish this small essay. I want to convey many views or ideas, but I can't write them in English, I don't know how to express myself, even I don't even know what tense to should I use. I am so upset. Who can help me? !

Teach me English.

Wow...Today  it's is so cold today.
Yesterday I planned to climb the mountains around The West Lake with my roommates, but unfortunately, today it has been rainning all day and it's very cold outside. So, we have to cancel the our plans and stay at the dormitory. Today is so boring. However, now I have a new plan. I want I'm going to go to Binjiang tomorrow, where has there are many delicious and cheap snakes.  I must be I'm very happy, because I am a glutton! Let me I hope I can go for tomorrow.

I think my English is so poor when I finish after finishing this small essay. I want to convey many views or ideas, but I can't write them in English. I don't know how to express myself, even and I don't know what tense should I use. I am so upset. Who can help me !

Keep up the good work! I was able to understand what you were trying to convey, and that is the main function of language (communication). Fluency and accuracy will come with practice, patience, and a targeted learning plan.  PS-it's also raining where I live in Canada :)