Rainy Days

Raining and raining again with cold wind and falling leaves. (leaf .) It's Autumn in Shanghai, a bad season. I hate the weather being (is) so cold that I can’t wear a beautiful dress or eat ice cream. Above (it) all, I am (have) always (been) in a bad mood on a (in) rainy day. Warmth and sunshine are what I really (exactly) lack in my life. Especially (for) these days, when I'm struggling with (sufferring for) the postgraduate exam. The damn exam takes a (must take) long time to prepare for and even then (that) the chance of passing (to pass) is very small. I have no time to play the guitar, read funny books, go sightseeing or even accompany (company with) my friends until Dec 28. I'm not sure if it’s worth choosing (to choose) the exam (to be LLM instead of) over finding a job now because (. Cuz) most of my classmates have been awarded an (gotten a) internship (intership) and are preparing to (for) graduate. I will get nothing if i can’t pass the exam finally and all my effort (efforts), time and energy (i spend on it) will be in vain. But I don’t want to give up. Maybe we need to sacrifice a lot to achieve our ambitions. (everything we want needs paying a lot for it.) So I just need a blade of sunshine now to shine (light) on my plain life.

Yes, it rained heavily in Shanghai on Halloween Night. Good article. I have suggested a few amendments here using a different choice to words in places. 

Rainy days

Raining and raining again with cold wind and falling leaf .It's Autumn in Shanghai,a bad season.I hate the weather is so cold that i cant can't wear beautiful dress or eat ice cream.Above it all,i have always been in bad mood in rainy day.Warmth and sunshine are what i exactly lack in my life.Especially for these days,i'm sufferring for the postgraduate exam.The damn exam must take long time to prepare and even that the chance to pass is very small.I have no time to play guitar ,read funny books,go sightseeing or even company with my friends until Dec 28.I'm not sure if its worth to choose the exam to be LLM instead of finding a job now.Cuz Because most of my classmates have gotten a an internship and preparing for graduate.I will get nothing if i cant can't pass the exam finally and all efforts ,time and energy i spend on it will be in vain.But i dont want to give up.Maybe everything we want needs (what do you mean needs?) You mean  necessities paying a lot for it.So i just need a blade of sunshine now to light on my plain simple life.