My View on Happiness

As for happiness, different people have different definitions about it.
Some people think ,with plenty of money they can afford expensive cars, and luxurious houses, and they can travel around the world. In they their heart money means happiness. Of couse other people hold the different opinon: they think happiness should connect means connecting with our family, friends, and other people more often. If they can take time with people who they loved and enjoy have a good time with they will fell feel very happy and satisfied.
As far as I’m concernd, I support the last opinon. Money can buy luxuriours houses but not a perfect lover; money can buy goods but not a good health. Money is the a part of my life, but money don’t doesn't means happiness. A good lover, a lovely chrildren, and a job, and some heart-to-heart friends, the most things is we can love each other, that’s the real happiness!

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My view on happiness

As for happiness, different people have different definitions of it.
Some people think, with plenty of money they can afford an expensive car, luxurious houses, and that they can travel around the world. In their heart money means happiness. Of couse other people have different opinons. They think happiness is connecting with our family, friends and other people more often. If they can take time with people who they love and enjoy a good time they will feel very happy and satisfied.
As far as I’m concernd, I support the last opinon. Money can buy luxurious houses but not a perfect lover. Money can buy goods but not good health. Money is the part of my life, but money don’t means happiness, a good lover, lovely children, a job, and some close friends. The main things is we can love each other, that’s the real happiness!