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AERIAL DANCE pt. 2 (impressions) I said that my next "notebook entry" will be my impressions about aerial dance, so here we go: Hmm... To begin with, it wasn't Aerial DANCE. It was actually Aerial YOGA. A loooot of breathing and stretching! My body hurts -.- ( :P ). I found the "yoga part" a little bit boring but I loved the part that we were hanging from the fabrics! The truth is that I am not considering of going again because everything was moving too slow for my taste! I am now thinking of trying something different. Pole dancing or just dancing! I'll think about it! (I uploaded a photo from the lesson)

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AERIAL DANCE pt. 2 (impressions)
I said that my next "notebook entry" will be my impressions about aerial dance, so here we go:

Hmm...
To begin with, it wasn't Aerial DANCE. It was actually Aerial YOGA. A loooot of breathing and stretching! My body hurts -.- ( :P ).
I found the "yoga part" a little bit boring but I loved the part that we were hanging from the fabrics!
The truth is that I am not considering of going again because everything was moving too slow for my taste! I am now thinking of trying something different. Pole dancing or just dancing! I'll think about it!

(I uploaded a photo from the lesson)

 

Hi Effie,

You don’t need to use the word "of" it is unnecessary, apart from that it is perfect. Well done! :) 

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