2014/10/15 17:37 [English + 中文]

Oh hey.
Any explanations on grammar would be helpful, if you have time ^^.
I really like your comments.

Thank you for your time.
I apologize in advance if my Chinese is really off. Hard sentences are hard =/

Here is my blog. Whenever I finish writing an essay, it goes here every week.
http://sixiangdejuji.altervista.org/98/
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2014/10/15 17:37

I want to write.
我想写。

Grammatically correct, but I myself will say 我想写点东西-it sounds more natural and colloquial.

It is getting harder to write these days. My mind is filled with many things.
I don't want to write anything that is dull.
This is not me.

这几天越来越难写东西。很多东西充分我的想法。 很多东西充斥着我的脑海。充分is not a verb. 充斥 is the word you want, to describe "be filled with sth" which makes you feel bad. 想法 is thought/idea, 心/头脑/脑海 can be "mind".
我不要想写枯燥的东西，这样不是我。不要 is more used in "giving orders"

I want to write something beautiful each time, but it is complicated.
Sometimes, I too feel dull myself.
My days are long. I have to read a lot books and learn. This brings to mind, what it is like to sit at a desk all day?
What do you think?

我想每个次写美丽的东西，可是这样很复杂。 每次我都想写一些美丽的东西。 每个次 is not correct.
有时，我也感到枯燥。
我的天很长。我需要读很多书，学习很多，这让我想起，整天坐桌子是怎么样？ 

我的白天很长。我需要读很多书，然后学习。我不禁想起，整天坐在桌子边上是怎么样的？

我的天很长 sounds strange.
你觉得呢？

There are times that I like sitting down at a desk and learning, and there are times that I do not.
I think the bigger question is, do you like to sit?

有时我喜欢坐桌子学习，也有时我不喜欢。 有时候，我喜欢坐下学习，有时候我不喜欢。（坐桌子 sounds strange, 坐在桌子边上/旁边 is better, but they are somewhat verbose.）
我认为更大的问题是，你喜欢坐下吗？

How long do you like sitting?
1, 2 hours? How long can you sit for?

多长你喜欢坐下？-sounds strange because of the word order.  你喜欢坐多久/多长时间？
一，二个小时呢？多长你能坐下？

一两个小时吗？你能坐多久？We usually say 一两个小时 rather than 一、二个小时.

I sit at home, on the bus, and at school.
What about you? What do you look at when you are sitting?

我在家里，共汽车，学校里都坐下。 我坐在家里，在公车上，在学校里。More rhythmic.
你呢？你坐下的时候做什么？ Nice.

A book or a smartphone?
看书还是看智能手机？智能手机 is more written language, especially in technology field.

Your writing is very special, because it is very concise, and poetic. Hope this is helpful.

2014/10/15 17:37 [English + 中文]

Oh hey.
Any explanations on grammar would be helpful, if you have time ^^.
I really like your comments.

Thank you for your time.
I apologize in advance if my Chinese is really off. Hard sentences are hard =/

Here is my blog. Whenever I finish writing an essay, it goes here every week.
http://sixiangdejuji.altervista.org/98/
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2014/10/15 17:37

I want to write.
我想写。

It is getting harder to write these days. My mind is filled with many things.
I don't want to write anything that is dull.
This is not me.

这几天越来越难写东西。很多东西充分我的想法我脑子里充斥着太多的事情。
我不要写枯燥的东西，这样不是我。

I want to write something beautiful each time, but it is complicated.
Sometimes, I too feel dull myself.
My days are long. I have to read a lot books and learn. This brings to mind, what it is like to sit at a desk all day?
What do you think?

我想每个次写美丽的东西我每次都想写一些美丽的东西，可是这样很复杂(we ususally say it is difficult for me,In chinese is 可是这样对于我来说很难）。
有时，我也感到枯燥。
我的一天很长。我需要读很多书，学习很多，这让我想起，整天坐在书桌前桌子是怎么样怎样一种感觉?(I don't know what do you want to express?I guess the feeling) 
你觉得呢？

There are times that I like sitting down at a desk and learning, and there are times that I do not.
I think the bigger question is, do you like to sit?

有时我喜欢坐在桌子前学习，也有时我不喜欢。
我认为更大的问题是，你喜欢坐下吗？

How long do you like sitting?
1, 2 hours? How long can you sit for?

多长你喜欢坐下？ 你喜欢在书桌前坐多长时间呢？
一，、（you can use acaesura sign here,not a comma) 二两个小时呢？多长你能坐下？你能坐多久呢？

I sit at home, on the bus, and at school.
What about you? What do you look at when you are sitting?

我在家里，共汽车，学校里都坐下。 我在家里、在公交车上、在学校都坐着。
你呢？你坐下的时候做什么？

A book or a smartphone?
看书还是看智能手机？

Good Job^_^,just relax,I believe you can write something beautiful.