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Topic: Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies, because the country get noting from these student, and it will benefit to the country’s economy.
In my opinion, they are dead wrong, the reason follows: First, university education not only benefits the students themselves, but also benefits the society. The engineers, workers in factory, teachers in school, doctors in hospital, servant in government, and lawyers, scientists, businessmen, etc, many of them are the university educated, they are all serve for the society, benefit the technique, education, science, etc, benefit the society. Second, if university asks students for all cost of their study, and it will be a big money for many common family, many students will not go to university because their family can’t afford it, on one hand, the students lost the chance to get more knowledge and skills, on the other hand, the society lost many good server who may do a lot to the society. Third, there will be little chance for the poor family to change their situation because they can’t afford the cost of university to get knowledge and skills for better life, even sometimes, government or society have to give them some money to maintain them. Fourth, the poor will always have little chance to get good education, they will get poorer and poorer, inversely, and the wealthy will get richer and richer because of good education, and this will result in society polarization, social would become unstable, even be at war.
All in all, I disagree that students pay all the cost of studies in university, to short term, the government seems to benefit, but, in the long run, it is much harmful to society.
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