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English Writing Competition Next saturday I will join English writing competition. 3 more days. I am really excited. Tomorrow, I will share example of my short story. So you can help me to correction my grammar. I hope I can winning this competition and make my parents proud of me. By the way, today I was really dissapointed with my friends. They are really fake. I can't understand why they are acted like care about me but they don't. That's make me sad. I really want have a true friend in my life. Is it wrong? I hope they can understand my feeling inside and become my true friends.

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English Writing Competition

Next saturday I will join English writing competition. 3 more days. I am really excited. Tomorrow, I will share example of my short story. So you can help me to correct my grammar. I hope I can win  this competition and make my parents proud of me.

By the way, today I was really disappointed with my friends. They are really fake. I can't understand why they acted like they  about me but they don't. That makes me sad. I really want to have  a true friend in my life. Is it wrong? I hope they can understand my feeling inside and become my true friends.

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