Well done, Wesley! This is an excellent practice letter, and in my own opinion your letter is a high pass. Keep it up!

Practice： IELTS Write Task 1

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are problems with this and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.

In the letter
-describe the situation
-explain the problems and why it is difficult to work
-say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Mr. Li,

I am currently accommodated at JinXian Hall where I share Room 618 with another student. Although I am very satisfied with the accommodation, I find that it is becoming more and more difficult to live with my roommate.

There are two issues I must present mention. The first is the noise he makes. He likes playing music at a high volume, This which really disturbs my concentration on when studying. I and the students in the neighbouring rooms have asked him not to do this, but he completely ignores our requests. Another issue is that he often invites his friends to our room in the evening. Once he even held a celebration party here. I have asked him not to do it again, but he continues to do it anyway.

Obviously, these two problems are making it almost impossible to study in the room. I have to work in the library which is not always convenient. Besides, the rent agreement for college accommodation clearly states that student must avoid making too much noise and not have visitors late in the evening.

If it is impossible to move my roommate out, I would like to request similar accommodation at JinXian Hall. If a single room is available, I would prefer that.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,
Wesley