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A Day Passed Without The Meaning I felt tired and bored with work when I woke up in the morning. I lied lazily on the floor then slowly texted a message to inform our administrator for my absence. My boss was angry but It didn't make sense to me. I felt into sleep again and I got up at 8:30 AM. I had a whole free day but I did nothing. I and Lin (my couch suffer) just found a place for breafast, then went back room to see movies saparately. We had a late breakfast so we skept our lunch. I slept again. When I woke up, Lin went for a massage. I took my motorbike and went around. Suddenly I saw Lin walking on the pavement. Then we travelled without helmets. We were catched by Cop when we were heading to the super market. Ofcourse, I got a punishment for my mistake. And Now I am lying on the floor and feeling bad. A day passed without the meaning.

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A Day Passed Without The Meaning

I felt tired and bored with work when I woke up in the morning. I lied lay lazily on the floor, then slowly texted a message to inform our administrator for of my absence. My boss was angry, but it didn't make sense matter to me. I felt into fell asleep again and I later got up at 8:30 AM. I had a whole free day, but I did nothing. I and Lin (my couch sufferer) just found a place for breafast, then went to back rooms to see movies saparately. We had a late breakfast so we skept skipped our lunch. I slept again. When I woke up, Lin went for a massage. I took my motorbike and went drove around. Suddenly I saw Lin walking on the pavement. Then we travelled together without helmets. We were catched caught by a cop when we were heading to the super market. Of course, I got a punishment(ticket?) for my mistake. And now I am lying on the floor and feeling bad. A day passed without the meaning.

 

I hope that you have the chance to find meaning in your future.

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A Day Passed Without The Meaning

I felt tired and bored with work when I woke up in the morning. I lied lay lazily on the floor then slowly texted a message to inform our administrator for of my absence. My boss was angry, but It it didn't make sense to me. I felt fell into to sleep again and I got up at 8:30 AM. I had a whole free day , but I did nothing. I and Lin Lin and I (my couch suffer) just found a place for breafast, then went back to our room to see watch movies saparately. We had a late breakfast so we skept skipped our lunch. I slept again. When I woke up, Lin went for a massage. I took my motorbike and went around. Suddenly, I saw Lin walking on the pavement. Then we travelled (rode is better) without helmets. We were catched caught by a Cop cop when we were heading to the super market. Of course, I got a punishment was punished for my mistake. And Now now I am lying on the floor and feeling bad. A day passed without the meaning.

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This is quite good! However, you have a few problems. When you use "to lie" meaning "to tell a lie", the past tense is "lied." When you use "to lie" meaning "to lie on the floor", the past tense is "lay." So, in your first sentence the past tense should be "lay."

 

Here's the conjugation of "to lie" = (http://en.bab.la/conjugation/english/lie)

 

I hope that helps!

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