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New Zealand New Zealand, the last place where China’s most popular variety shows “Dad,where are we going ”have visited, is so beautiful. It impressed me deeply. I should have a travel to there one day. Some people said Australia is a lucky country, I think New Zealand is also a lucky country. The land area of New Zealand are 260000 square kilometers, but the number of population are only 4 million or more. Lets have a compare ,the land area of Fujian province of China are 120000 square kilometers, less than half of New Zealand, but the number of population are 30 million,seven times of New Zealand. It is said that there are penguins in some island in New Zealand. I’m not sure. I have not see a penguin. I cannot wait to have a travel.

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New Zealand, the last place where China’s most popular variety shows “Dad, Where Are We Going?” have has visited, is so beautiful. It impressed me deeply. I should have a feel that I have to travel to there one day. 

Some people said Australia is a lucky country, but I think New Zealand is also a lucky country. The land area of New Zealand are is 260,000 square kilometers, but the number of population are is only 4 million or more. Let's have a compare make a comparison: the land area of Fujian province of in China are is 120,000 square kilometers, less than half of New Zealand, but the number of population are is 30 million, seven times that of New Zealand.
It is said that there are penguins in some islands in New Zealand. I’m not sure. I have not seen a penguin. I cannot wait to have a travel. trip.


I hope you are able to visit New Zealand some day! 我也没去过。

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Travel 是动词，trip 是名词，在这里你需要用名词。If you want to use "travel", you could say: "I cannot wait to travel to New Zealand some day."

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