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Talking about Beijing Part One Beijing is the capital of China, maybe you haven't came here , but it doesn't matter , I will say something about Beijing, and I hope it will help you . If you haven't came to China, I suggest you come to Beijing as your first station of your China traveling. Today I will talk about the cultures. As we know , Beijing has thousands of year's history, it's also the capital of many dynasties , for instence, Qing dynasty, Ming dynasty, Yuan dynasty and so on. It mix many nations' culture. I recommend you some famous places where you should go, for example , you can go to The Fobidden City , it is the palace where the king and his wife lived. You can see many things that king used and enjoy the palaces. The other place is The Great Wall . It was builded at least 2000 years ago, the ancients builded it to defend eninies . The last one is HuTong, you can go there to find out how the citizens lived.

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Talking about Beijing Part One

 

Beijing is the capital city of China. Maybe you haven't come here, but it doesn't matter - I will speak about Beijing, and I hope it will help you.

 

If you haven't come to China, I suggest you come to Beijing first.


Today I will talk about the cultures. As we all know, Beijing has thousands of year's history. It's also the capital of many dynasties, such as, Qing dynasty, Ming dynasty, Yuan dynasty and so on. It is a mix of many nations' culture.


I recommend that you visit some famous places such as, for example, The Fobidden City. This is the palace where the King and his wife lived. You can see many things that the King used, whilst enjoying the palaces. Another place to visit is The Great Wall . It was built at least 2000 years ago by the ancient people to defend themselves. The last one is HuTong, which is a place that shows how the citizens lived.

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