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I wrote this article during my English lesson, so it must be right because my teacher marked it.:)
In spite of the fact that my teacher checked it out it, I'm not sure that the article is right.
My name's Denis. I've been learning English for nine months. I've I decided to start learning English because I have to use English during in my scientific job. A The topic of my dissertation is about the reconstructon of urban cities, given the problems of insolation. Insolation is a word which describes an irradiation process of buildings by the sunlight. It's one of the most important facts, variables which is that is taken into accounts for when indesigning of new buildings. I want to use mirrors and optical fibers to solve the problems.
Two weeks ago I was on holiday. I had decided to go to Riga, and that was a good decision. There are plenty of delicious meals. Most of all I liked the milk and meat. Also if you decided to go there, you'd find lots of different sorts of beer. Sometimes At times when I was trying to speak Russian with Latvians I felt the embarrassed because they understood Russian, but anyway kept speaking with me in Latvian. Overall, the trip was great.
I moved to Moscow almost 6 years ago. If I'd had an the opportunity to change my choice, I wouldn't have done it, because I'm glad that I've did done it. When I was a student my mother told me that I had to to listen to my heart, and my heart by at the time said that I should go there. So, here I am I'm here.
Thanks in advance!
I wrote the article during my English lesson, so it must be right because my teacher marked it.:)
In spite of the fact that my teacher checked out it out, I'm not sure that the article is right.
My name's Denis. I've been learning English for nine months. I've decided to start learning English because I have to use English during my scientific job. A The topic of me my dissertation is about the reconstructon of urban cities, given the problems of insolation. Insolation is a word which describes an irradiation process of buildings by the sunlight. It's one of the most important facts, which is accounted for in desighing the designing of new buildings. I want to use mirros mirrors and optical fibers to solve the problems.
Two weeks ago I was on holiday. I had decided to go to Riga, and that was a good decision. There are plenty of delicious meals. Most of all I liked milk and meat. Also if you decided to go there, you'd you'll find lots of deifferent different sorts of beer. Sometimes when I was trying to speak Russian with Latvian people I felt the embarrassment embarrassed, because they understood Russian, but anyway kept speaking witn with me in Latvian. Overall, the trip was great.
I moved to Moscow almost 6 years ago. If I'd had an opportunity to change me my choice, I wouldn't have done it, because I'm glad that I've done did it. When I was a student my mother told me that I had to to lesten listen to my heart, and my heart by at the time said that I should go there. So I'm here.
Thanks in advance!
Well done. In some places I just needed to correct the spelling of the words. Jenny
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