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I got pissed off!!! I've been having the black circles ever since I was still in elementary school.The reason why I'm having them isn't that I like staying up deep into night often.I think it's just uhm,there's something wrong with my blood circulation. My friends often tell me that I have horrible black circles around my eyes,which absolutely make me feel so bad....what's worse,I got my bangs trimmed last night,and the hairdresser made my hair look uglier because last time I went to the hair salon,the hair stylist did an amazing work on my hair,and I liked it very much!But now,my face just looks MUCH BIGGER than before after the haircut!T_T Anyway,I'm gonna buy a concealer to cover the bad-looking black circles on my face and I also need to do my nails.Some of the color has already faded,so I gotta paint another new color which is pink on my nails (:

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I got pissed off!!!

I've been having the black  dark circles under my eyes ever since I was still in elementary school. The reason why I'm having them isn't that I like staying up deep late into the night often. I think it's just uhm that there's something wrong with my blood circulation.
My friends often tell me that I have horrible black dark circles around my eyes, which absolutely make me feel so bad. What's worse, I got had my bangs trimmed last night, and the hairdresser made my hair look uglier because last time I went to the hair salon, the hair stylist did an amazing work job on my hair, and I liked it very much! But now, my face just looks MUCH BIGGER than before after the haircut! T_T
Anyway, I'm gonna going to buy a concealer to cover the bad-looking black dark circles on my face and I also need to do my nails. Some of the color has already faded, so I gotta have got to paint another new color which is pink on my nails. (:
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ah,thank you so much for sharing the advice with me.I'm grateful!
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Good job on your writing. I did not see any errors. For the dark circles, try using expresso or concentrated coffee either in a liquid or a warm, finely ground paste. Rub the paste or liquid into your your dark circles and let it sit on your face for about 15 minutes. The caffeine in the coffee compound will stimulate blood circulation. Stay away from eating too much salt and MSG.

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