New life

Now, I'm a college student. I'm still getting used it.There are roomates that I do not know. Maybe I still like to live in the house. I miss my parents. I can't go to meet them. Because they're in Hualien and I'm in Taipei now. We will call each other when we miss each other. I know that i have to be independent. I don't want my parents to worry about me. So, I'm saying hello to my new life. 

"I" as a personal pronoun is always capitalized. For example, it is neccesary to say "I am eating", it is not acceptable to write "i am eating" because the "I" is lowercase. 

Also, it is necessary that you put a space after a period or a comma. You need to write "Now, I am a college student. It is not acceptable to write "Now,I" because there is no space between the comma and the next word.

Maybe as a word means that you are expressing uncertainity, are you uncertain about wanting to live at home?

I like your essay. I hope that you enjoy your newfound independence. Enjoy living in Taipei!