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Innocent This is a place of 嘉義. When I went here I saw a child chasing a dog and called it poppy. He also looked very happy. We walked around and were going to leave, we met the child again. He still chasing the dog and felt very sadness when leaving. When we are the child we can feel very happy just for a little thing. But when we grow up we feel sad just for a little thing. I think that why I very like children. I can see the simple-minded from them. I found that I ever be innocent. I can found myself and don't be lost. The most important is I won't defeat by reality.

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Innocent

This is a place of 嘉義. When I went came here, I saw a child chasing a dog and called calling it poppy a puppy. He also looked very happy. We walked around and were when we were going to leave, we met the child again. He was still chasing the dog and I felt very sadness sad when leaving.
When we are the child children, we can feel very happy just for about a little thing. But when we grow up, we feel sad just for about a little thing.
I think that is why I very really like children. I can see the their simple-mindedness from them. I found that I ever can be innocent. I can found find myself and don't not be lost. The most important thing is I won't be defeated by reality.

 

Only a little confusion about using past and present tenses, like "called" versus "calling". Good job! 

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