Could you proofread the following note which describes traditional dress ?

Describe clothing that you wear on special occasions
You should say.. when will you wear it
What do the clothes look like
where did you buy it
why you wear it on special occasions

On special occasions, such as wedding ceremonies and holidays, Koreans usually wear Hanbok, a traditional Korean dress. on specially occasions such as wedding ceremony and holidays. It is handmade and featers a train to a long skirt. My mother-in-law gave me it as a wedding gift. She bought it in her neighborhood. She has been acquainted the trailer for over 20 years. To let people know about Korean culture on special occasions, when I and my husband are invited a American friend’s house, we will wear it. Newlyweds especially wear the traditional dress when they visit relatives or their parents’ house to show respect to elders and receive congratulations. In addition, on the baby’s first birthday and their own sixtieth birthday, people wear Hanbok as they are meaningful birthdays according to Korean tradition.

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Could you proofread the following note which describes traditional dress ?

Describe clothing that you wear on special occasions
You should say.. when will you wear it
What do the clothes look like
where did you buy it
why you wear it on special occasions

Koreans usually wear Hanbok, a traditional Korean style of dress for on specially occasions such as wedding ceremonies and holidays festivals. It is handmade with embroidered silk fabric and measured by a trailer tailor with embroidered silk fabric.

The dress is typically consists with of a short jacket and a long skirt. My mother in law gave me it one as a wedding gift. She bought it in her neighborhood. she is from a tailor she has been acquainted the trailer with for over 20 years.

To let people know see Korean culture on special occasions, when I and my husband and I are invited to an American friend’s house, we will wear it. Newlyweds especially wear the traditional dress when they visit relatives or a parents’ house to show respect to their elders and receive be congratulated. In addition, people wear Hanbok for a 1st baby’s first birthday and 60th years birthday, people wear Hanbok as they are meaningful birthdays according to Korean tradition.