About love

Love is everything in the life(,)but there's (a habit/a tendency) in the people's heart(s [pluralize the second related noun too]) (to) lie(.) (Lying) hurt(s) my heart [hellishly? sounds old-fashioned, "sure as hell hurts my heart" would be idiomatic, but more like you're emphatically confirming: "does lying hurt your heart?" "it sure as hell hurts my heart!" -- "you're damn right it hurts my heart!" "you bet it does!" etc]. I try to be a good boy ["good boy" makes me think of someone talking to a dog, at least in American English] when ask someone to help just is trying to put things to make him/ her escape from my hell become learner as hell in eyes some of people [not sure what you mean by this sentence, are you saying that you are worried that asking for language help would pull the person you ask into your private hell of frustration around communication? If that's the case, I really don't mind :) ]. That's everything in my heart now and (I) write this just (to) try to improve my writing(,) no one think this relate(s) to him / her [I think you would use "you" here because you're making a request direcetly to the abstract "one" but the grammar is confusing to me. I would use say instead the more idiomatic "I write this just to improve my writing, no one take this personally" or even simply "this is just to improve my writing, no one take it personally").

It's About l Love

Love is everything in the our life ves

but there's in the  a tendency people's  in the heart  of a man habit lie more covered with abrasive  lies that thing as hell hurt my in our  hearts. I'm trying  to be a good boy  person when ask someone ask to for help

just is trying to put things to make him/ her escape from my hell become learner as hell in eyes some of people.( it doesn't make sense 

That's everything in my heart right now and I write this just try to improve my writing skills

no one think this rate relate to him / her.