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The Real Madrid This night will play the "Real Madrid" versus "Basilea". I'm fan of Real Madrid since I was small. The Real Madrid is the champions of europe, however, we have played three matches league BBVA and we have won only one. The player Cristiano Ronaldo has had some discomfort in his leg, and other players don't have played very well. We need score goals and win because the Real Madrid has players very good! However, Real Madrid won the "Super Copa de Europa" versus Sevilla F.C. this summer. I hope the Real Madrid improves and Cristiano Ronaldo, Gareth Bale and Karim Benzema (the called BBC) makes a lot of goals. Finally, I hope Iker Casillas stop many balls.

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The Real Madrid

Tonight Real Madrid will play against Basilea.This night will play the "Real Madrid" versus "Basilea". I'm I've been a fan of Real Madrid since I was small. The Real Madrid is are the champions of Europe, however, we have played three matches league BBVA league matches and we have won only one.
The player Cristiano Ronaldo has had some discomfort pain in his leg, and other players don't have not played very well. We need to score goals and win because the Real Madrid has very good players very good! However, Real Madrid won the "Super Copa de Europa" versus against Sevilla F.C. this summer.
I hope the Real Madrid team improves and Cristiano Ronaldo, Gareth Bale and Karim Benzema (they are called BBC) makes score a lot of goals. Finally, I hope that Iker Casillas stops many balls.

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The Real Madrid

Tonight  Real Madrid will play against Basilea. I have been a fan of Real Madrid since I was young. The Real Madrid are the champions of Europe, however, we have played three matches league BBVA league and we have won only one.
The player Cristiano Ronaldo has had some discomfort in his leg, and other players don't have not played very well. We need to score goals and win because the Real Madrid has very good players very good! However, Real Madrid won the "Super Copa de Europa" against Sevilla F.C. this summer.
I hope the Real Madrid improves and Cristiano Ronaldo, Gareth Bale and Karim Benzema (they are called BBC) makes a lot of goals. Finally, I hope Iker Casillas saves many balls. OR, I hpoe that Iker Casillas makes lots of saves.

 

Well done.

1. In Spanish you say ''El Real Madrid, el Barca etc'' in English we just say ''Arsenal, Manchester United etc. You dont need ''the''

2. In Spanish you use the present tense ''Desde pequeña soy hincha del Real'' In English we use the past tense ''I have been a fan of Real Madrid since I was young''

 

3. In Spanish a football team is in singular. "El Real Madrid es el mejor equipo del mundo'' In English a football team = plural ''Manchester United are playing very well this season''

 

Cristiano Ronalda is my favorite player.

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