My story of about learning English

The 13th of July, 2013
Today I am going to the annual musical festival, it callt named, "Picnic with Poster". I want to see Zhanna Aguzarova and listen to my favourite band, Spleen. In general, it this is my reason purpose my visit for going to Picnic. Other musical bands I know a little bit about the other musical bands.
The headliner band is band Blur, which I know a bit about too. My friend told me that it is they are a very famous musical band and sent their me the video for their song. The song seemed familiar, but not more.
The perfomance by Alexander Vasilev had finished and . The people are not leaving. I want to leave, but yielding to the entreaties of my friends, decide to stay and watch a bit of the last group wich of acts at in the festival.
It had begun...I understand that sounds something force us to move, though unknow we don't know why.
I have begin to dance automatically to dance and sing along to the words, that manages to pull out of get the crowd singing.
The People all around me are singing all the songs in a row along with the band sounded from on the stage.
Oh my God! It is English, the language wich that I am have been trying to learn within for 5 years. Start, throwing, then begin again...
And now I want to sing English words, to understand what the man on stage is singing man on stage with such charisma that it is perceived on at the energy level.
An hour and a half passed like a moment...
My legs are already tired from the high wedgies I'm wearing before Blur's perfomance Blur, I dont remember about it and easily jump under into Song2. The last song... Salute...
I am going home. "Come on, come on, come on get through it..." singing all the members of the wagon in which I go I'm in are singing... and so the whole song until the end, and then the next...

My story of learning English

The 13th of July, 2013
Today I am going to the annual musical festival. It is called Picnic with Poster (Afisha Picnic).
I want to see Zhanna Aguzarova and listen to my favourite band, Spleen.
In general, it is purpose my visit to This is why I am going to visit the Picnic. I know some other musical bands as well I know a little bit.
The Headliner is the band, Blur, which I know a bit too. My friend told me that it is a very famous musical band and sent me their the video for the song one of their clips. The song seemed familiar, but nothing more.
The perfomance by Alexander Vasilev has finished. The people are not leaving. I want to leave, but yielding to the entreaties of friends, decide to stay and watch a bit of the last group wich acts performing at the festival.
It had begun/It began...I understand that sounds something forcing to move [?], though unknow I'm not sure.
I have begun/I automatically began automatically to dance and sing along with the words that manages to pull out of the crown singing.
The people around me are singing all the songs in a row sounded from the stage.
O my God! It is the English language/It is English, which I am have been trying to learn within for 5 years. Starting, throwing abandoning/quitting,then begining again (resuming)...
And now I want to sing the English words, to understand what is singing the man on stage is singing about with such charisma that it is perceived on the highest energy level.
A hour and a half passed like a moment...
My legs were tired from high wedgies [?] before the perfomance by Blur. I don't remember about it and easily jump under into the second song2. Last song...Salute...
I am going home. " Come on, come on,come on get through it..." singing all the members of everyone is singing in the wagon trainin which I am riding...and so the whole song until the end, and then the next...