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This is not a trip but a incredible memory. I never know it would be a big change for me. I met many people in my trip,especially two Honkong girls. We met in 宜蘭 at first. We had a nice conversation. Then we continued our own trip. But we met in 花蓮 again. It was a unbelievable destiny. We also had a nice memory in 花蓮. I think I will never forget you. You appeared in my bad time. You gave me a incredible experience so that I was really happy and forgot all of sadness. I believe we will meet again in someday. I will really miss you. This is the end but a start.
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I like traveling because going for a trip will make you relaxed .Also, you could meet different people who can effect you with his or her positive mood. then,you will think of the life,the people,the bad things and so on. you will understand something you have never considered.
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The end
This is not a trip but a incredible memory. I never knoew it would be a big change for me. I met many people in my trip, especiallyincluding two Honkong girls from Hong Kong. We met in 宜蘭 at first. We had a nice conversation. Then we continued our own trips. But we met in 花蓮 again. It was an unbelievable destiny. We also had a nice memory in 花蓮. I think I will never forget [1]you. You appeared in my bad time. You gave me a incredible experience so that I was really happy and forgot all of sadness. I believe we will meet again in someday. I will really miss you. This is not the end, but a start.
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What a nice memory. How fun to meet someone special and run into them again.
[1] When you start using "you," it tells me as the reader you are talking directly to the girls. But since you weren't before, it creates a shift. It might be helpful to create a new paragraph there so the shift feels more natural.
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