第二篇-練習烹飪
你們好,
我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的文章!
I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay!
我覺得很幸福能有這麼多朋友來幫我!
I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends!
正如我以前寫,這幾天我不做太多。
as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。
我利用我的空間來練習烹飪。
I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking.
I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg.
我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,超級但。
Everything came out good!
都做得不錯。
Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook.
其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。
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第二篇-練習烹飪
你們好,我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的( 我的前一篇)文章!
I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay!
我覺得很幸福(幸運)能有這麼多朋友來幫我!
I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends!
正如我
as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。
我利用我的空
I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking.
I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg.
我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,
Everything came out good!
都做得不錯。
Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook.
其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。
I made the corrections and suggestions according to your english sentences.
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thanks, i think ?? :)
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u r so cute..
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很簡單但是對身體很好! 民以食為天! 喜歡這個句子!hehe
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第二篇-練習烹飪
你們好,我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的文章!
I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay!
我覺得很
I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends!
正如我以前寫的那樣,這幾天我
as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。
(as=像……那樣) ( "不"means u don't want to do things while "没"means u want to do things,but you failed to do so.)
我利用我的
I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking.
I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg.
我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,
Everything came out good!
都做得不錯。
Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook.
其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。
老颜,你的文章已经写的很好啦!继续努力吧!还有你的厨艺,呵呵。那么多人帮你批改作文是因为你之前帮了大家很多忙。O(∩_∩)O~
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