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第二篇-練習烹飪 你們好, 我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的文章! I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay! 我覺得很幸福能有這麼多朋友來幫我! I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends! 正如我以前寫,這幾天我不做太多。 as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。 我利用我的空間來練習烹飪。 I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking. I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg. 我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,超級但。 Everything came out good! 都做得不錯。 Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook. 其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。

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第二篇-練習烹飪

你們好,

我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的( 我的前一篇)文章!
I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay!


我覺得很幸福(幸運)能有這麼多朋友來幫我!
I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends!

正如我以前寫前文所說,這幾天我不做太多沒什麼事做 or 比較悠閒。
as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。


我利用我的空間閑來練習烹飪。
I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking.

I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg.
我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,超級但煎雞蛋(fried eggs: 煎雞蛋; scrambled eggs: 炒雞蛋)。

Everything came out good!
都做得不錯。

Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook.
其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。


I made the corrections and suggestions according to your english sentences. 

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thanks, i think ?? :)
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u r so cute..
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很簡單但是對身體很好! 民以食為天! 喜歡這個句子!hehe
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第二篇-練習烹飪

你們好,

我很驚訝那麼多人響應了我以前寫的文章!
I am surprised how many people responded to my previous essay!


我覺得很幸福幸運能有這麼多朋友來幫我! (幸福=happy, 幸運=fortunate)
I am very fortunate to have so many helpful friends!

正如我以前寫的那樣,這幾天我不做太多沒做什麽事情。
as i said in my previous essay, these past few days I have not been doing much 。
(as=像……那樣) ( "不"means u don't want to do things  while "没"means u want to do things,but you failed to do so.)

我利用我的空間空閑時間/業余時間來練習烹飪。 (空間means space or room)
I have been taking advantage of my free time to practice cooking.

I made red bean soup, congee (rice porridge), and fried egg.
我做了紅豆湯,稀飯,超級但炒雞蛋。

Everything came out good!
都做得不錯。

Actually, I know how to cook more Chinese dishes than western dishes, because a Chinese person taught me how to cook.
其實, 我會做的中國菜比西方菜還多, 因為是一位中國人教我做的。


老颜,你的文章已经写的很好啦!继续努力吧!还有你的厨艺,呵呵。那么多人帮你批改作文是因为你之前帮了大家很多忙。O(∩_∩)O~

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