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My three favorite dishes. My three favorite dishes are different from each other. The first dish is veggie pizza, which is Italian food. Italian food is famous in all the world and it is so delicious. The veggie pizza has a variety of flavors, because each veggie pizza has different vegetables and this dish is very simple to do, and I could cook it in my home sometime of the day. The second dish I like eating is meat. Meat is a delicious food, especially with some sauce. I like eating chicken as fried chicken or cooked chicken with vegetables. When the chicken is cooked with pasta and vegetables it make the meal tastier. The third top dish is all sweets: chocolate, lemon pie, cakes. The meal is more complete when has some dessert. All the sweets are tasty and there are many kinds of them, so I could eat different types of them every day. These 3 different kinds of foods make me happier and if I could choose, I would like to eat them always.

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Muito bom Thamyres

 

1.  The Veggie pizza has a variety of flavors, because each veggie pizza has different vegetables and this dish is very simple to do make.

 

It is not incorrect to say "the veggie pizza" but because you stated in the previous sentence your subject, it is ok to start this sentence with simply "Veggie pizza..".

 

2. I like eating chicken as fried chicken or cooked chicken with vegetables.

 

It is more proper here to say:  I like eating chicken that is fried or more simply: I like eating fried chicken


3. These  3 three different kinds of foods make me happier and if I could choose, I would like to eat them always.

 

And very simple but when writing it is more proper to spell the number (three) instead of writing it.

 

Good job and keep practicing

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My three favorite dishes.

My three favorite dishes are different from each other. The first dish is veggie pizza, which is Italian food and . Italian food is famous in all throughout the world, as well as being  and it is so delicious. The Veggie pizza has can have a variety of flavors because each veggie pizza has different vegetables and this dish is very simple to do make. Sometimes, and I could cook make it in my at home sometime of the day.

The second dish I like eating is meat, which Meat is a delicious food, especially with some sauce. I like eating chicken as fried chicken or cooked chicken cooked with vegetables. When the chicken is cooked with pasta and vegetables it makes the meal tastier.

The third top dish is all sweets: chocolate, lemon pie, cakes. The A meal is more complete when it includes has some dessert. All the sweets are tasty and there are many kinds of them, so I could eat a different types of them every day.

These 3 different kinds of foods make me happier and if I could choose, I would always like to eat them always.

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My Three Favorite Dishes

My three favorite dishes are different from each other. The first dish is veggie pizza, which is Italian food. Italian food is famous around the world and it is so delicious. A veggie pizza may have a variety of flavors, because each veggie pizza has different vegetables_is very simple to do, and I could cook it at home any time. The second dish I like eating is meat. Meat is a delicious food, especially with some sauce. I like eating_fried chicken or cooked chicken with vegetables. When the chicken is cooked with pasta and vegetables, it makes the meal tastier. The third top dish I enjoy is all sweets: chocolate, lemon pie or cakes. A meal is more complete when it includes some dessert. All the sweets are tasty and there are many kinds of them, so I could eat_them every day. These 3 different kinds of food make me happier and if I could choose, I would like to eat them always. :D

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