My New Job

Last month I becan to working in a hotel, and I'm very happy because I can want to learn many other languages, and I'll be able to can help many a lot of people everyday.
I work six days at a week and have one day i can to do what I prefer want. I go to and eat pizza or others things and i relax all day.
I'm very proud of myaelf when the customers make give me compliments, but I'm looking intending for to improve my English.

     I started working in a hotel last month and I'm happy with this new job, because I have the opportunity to learn about different languages and help people. I work six days during the week. On my day off, I go out for pizza or something else and relax all day. I'm proud of myself when customers compliment me, but I am still looking to improve my English skill.

My new job

Last month i I became went to work in a hotel, I'm very happy because i I can to learn many languages and I can help many people everyday.
I work six days at a week and one day i can to do what i I prefer, i I go to eat pizza or do others things and i  I relax all day.
i'm very proud of me myself when the customers make give me compliments, but im  I'm looking for ways  to improve my english.

My New Job

Last month I became began to work in a hotel. I'm very happy because I can to learn many languages and I can help many people everyday.
I work six days at a week and one day once a week I can to do whatever I prefer such as going to eat pizza or others thing and I relax all day.
I'm very proud of me myself whenever the customers make give me compliments, but im I'm looking for to improve my english.

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