my life
It's twenty to twelve , but i still sleepy. I'm unhappy today.because yesterday evening.
they always talk about me.when they are talking together.
they always say impossible.when i told them about my thought.
i know that they can't cheat me.but i can't believe yet.
I read a book about always have dreams
everyone should a dreamer oneself.if everyone don't have a dream. a plan a wish.how can you know where you want to go.
mayber some of your dreams are unrealistic and impossible.but if you work hard everyone's dream may come true.
dreams in one way aren't expensive.they don't cost much money.even the poorest person in the world can have all the dreams.
but in another way they are expensive.because we have to work to make our dreams come ture.
dreams can come true,if they can't ,life will be more beautiful for the person who dream.but don't be a daydreamer.
i like this book very much.it teaches me a lot of things.i know i grow old by giving up my dreams.if stop my dreams i will close the door to
success.so i should keep a wondreful dream deep in my heart.
i know my dream is hard to me.but i will hard_working .it will can come true on day i think.
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This is a pretty long passage to correct and there are some parts whose meaning escapes me but I’ll give it a try.
It’s twenty to twelve and I’m sleepy. Today I’m unhappy because (of what happened) yesterday evening.
They always talk about me when they chat together.
They always say “Impossible!” when I tell them what I’m thinking.
I know they can’t deceive me (??) but I wonder.
I read a book about always having a dream.
Everyone should be a dreramer. If you don’t have a dreams or plans or hopes how do (or: can) you know where you want to go?
May be some of our dreams are unrealistic or impossible, but if you work hard (if you don’t give up) your dream may come true.
May be some of our dreams are unrealistic or impossible, but if you work hard (if you don’t give up) your dream may come true.
In one way, dreams aren’t expensive. They don’t cost much. Even the poorest person in the world can have a dream.
But in another way they can be expensive because we have to work hard to make our dreams come true.
Dreams can come true. When they do, life can be more beautiful for the dreamer. But don’t be a daydreamer.
I like this book very much. It has taught me a lot. I know I’ll grow old if I abandon my dreams.
If I stop dreaming I’ll close the door to success, so I have to keep my wonderful dream deep in my heart.
I know it will be hard for me to achieve my dream, but I’ll work hard. I think (I’m sure) it will come true one day.
那段文章是很好写的。 其实你说的有许多实话。 确实这个老爷爷并知道。
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