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My bedroom My bedrrom has something strage. It´s impossible to do so it clean, even when I make an effort to do so it. My bedrrom made a greater effort to keep messy. One thing that I don´t like about my bedrrom is the only window that it has, because is big and is infront of my house looking at the street. If you stand at my door, the first thing that you are going to look is that window. At the left side, against the wall, I have my bed. It´s a big bed. I don´t know if it is kingsize or queensize, but it is very comfortable. In front of my bed I have a little plastic furniture where I put some pictures. A side of that furniture I have another plastic furniture where I put some clothes. Then I have the window, next to the window, I have a little deskp with my computer. At the right side of the desk it is a small place and then I have my closet wich hasn´t doors only a big curtain. I enjoy stay in my bedrrom for I think it´s a placeful place.

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My Bedroom

 

My bedroom has something strange*. It´s impossible to do so keep it clean, even when I make an effort to do so it. My bedroom made makes a greater effort to keep stay messy. One thing that I don´t like about my bedroom is the only window that it has, because it is big and is in_front of my house overlooking at the street. If you stand at my door, the first thing that you are going to look at {better: "see"} is that window. At On the left side, against the wall, I have my bed. It´s a big bed. I don´t know if it is king-size or queen-size, but it is very comfortable. In front of my bed, I have a little plastic furniture {shelving/display unit?} where I put some pictures. At the side of that furniture, I have another plastic furniture {dresser?} where I put {better: store} some clothes. Then I have the window, next to the window, I have a little deskp with my computer. At the right side of the desk it is a small place area, and then I have my closet which hasn´t any doors, only a big curtain. I enjoy staying in my bedroom for because I think it´s a placefulpeaceful place.

 

 

*This phrasing is awkward. I think you mean "There's something strange about my bedroom", because of your next sentence.

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