There is a push to move medical records to electronic databases. Do you support this move?

Could you possibly proofread my note?

As more doctors and hospitals go digital with their patient medical records [we usually use "patient medical records" as a phrase for this topic]. Some people might say that keeping medical records secure is a challenging for them due to growing hacking problems. however, I think using electronic databases is by far the better way to safely keep medical records. This is because paper records are vulnerable to water and fire. Stacking up many boxes of paper records takes up too much room space.

Even It is also not easy to find old one’s patient medical records shortly quickly, and sometimes it is hard to read the hurried writing. Especially, in a hospital setting where time is always an important issue for saving one’s lives. If a Easy access to patient having medical history is rushed to in the emergency room allows medical staffs should find his past history and to make a quick decisions.

Because of For this reason, it would be a more efficient way to just type the patients ID and wait in a few minutes [minutes? I think you mean seconds] to see the one’s the patient's history on the computer rather than ransacking the one’s paper records.