This Is Me. Nice to Meet You

Hi, my name is Natália and I'm 14 years old. I'm a student. I'm from Brazil and I'm living in São José Dos Campos, São Paulo. I am taking a course in English in my city... I'm here to learn more English more, because I really like it.

My experience with English is primarily through music and through following my idols: One Direction, Justin Bieber, Avril Lavigne and Miley Cyrus. My dream is to meet them. :)

So...this is me (wearing a cap)

This is Me,nice to meet you

Hi,my name is Natália,I have 14 years old,I'm Student.I'm from Brazil and I live I'm living in São José Dos Campos - São Paulo. I am doing English course I do course of English in my city...I'm here to for learn english more, because I really like it.
My experience in English is musics and my idols: One Direction, Justin Bieber ,Avril Lavigne and Miley Cyrus. My dream is meet them :)
So...this is me (with a cap)

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This Is Me. Nice to Meet You

Hi, my name is Natália. I am 14 years old, I'm a student. I'm from Brazil and I'm living in São José Dos Campos - São Paulo. I am doing an English course in my city...I'm here to learn more English because I really like it.
My experience in English comes from my idols' music: One Direction, Justin Bieber, Avril Lavigne and Miley Cyrus. My dream is to meet them. :)

So...this is me (wearing a cap). - Nice to meet you, too! :D