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Nice job! It is unfortunate how difficult it is for some people to afford healthcare after retiring from work.
How well is the older generation treated in your country?
The Older/Elderly people in Spain usually spend a lot of time with their families family and They are seen asan important family members.
A lot of seniors older people help to bring up/raise of their grandchildren. In addition addiction, they are always therewhen you need them. Some grandparents care caring for their grandchildren while their parents are at work.
The government provides a monthly pension to the elderlyolder people. Usually, they receive less money than when they were working, and onin occasions this money isn't enough.
Seniors gethave discounts in the cinema, andin some shops, and the bus is free. They have a lot of free time and sometimes they can fulfill their dreams. For instance, they can go on make their dream trip/vacation, start a new hobby, or They can evenlearn a new language idioms.
However/Unfortunately, Although older people also suffer fromhave ("have" isn't wrong but sounds a little harsh) more diseases (than other age groups). They may experiencememory loss or They can have problems with their eyesight or with the hearing. Many Much of these people don´t have enough money to hire for They have a nurse to help them, and for this reason a lot of older people live are in nursing homes/ long term residences, where they receive needed better care.
How well are (more than one person) the older generation treated in your country?
The older people in Spain usually spend a lot of time with their family and They are seen as important family members.
A lot of older people help to bring up of their grandchildren. In addition, they are always there when you need them. Some grandparents care for their grandchildren while their parents are at work.
The government provides a monthly pension for the older people generation. Usually they receive less money than when they were working and on occasions, this money isn't enough.
Seniors have discounts in the cinema, in some shops and the bus is free to use. They have a lot of free time and sometimes they can fulfill their dreams. For instance: they can make go on their dream trip, start a new hobby or They can learn a new idioms.
Although However, older people have more diseases. They may have memory loss or They can have problems with their eyesight or with the hearing. Most of these people don´t have enough money for They to hire a nurse to help them and for this reason a lot of older people are in residences, where they receive better care.
Well done, this was a very interesting piece to read :)
The older [elderly] people in Spain usually spend a lot of time with their family, and they are seen as important family members.
A lot of older people help to bring up of their grandchildren. In addition, they are always there when you need them. Some grandparents care for their grandchildren while their parents are at work.
The government provides a monthly pension to older people. Usually, they receive less money than when they were working, and on occasion this money isn't enough.
Seniors receive discounts at the cinema, in some shops, and the bus is free. They have a lot of free time and sometimes they can fulfill their dreams. For instance, they can take their dream trip, start a new hobby, or they can learn a new language.
Older people get more diseases. They may experience memory loss, or they may have problems with sight or with hearing. Many of these people don't have enough money to hire a nurse to help them, and for this reason, many older people reside in residences where they receive care.
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