Hi Sarah, 

You've made a very good attempt with this writing, and I can see you're trying to push your own boundaries. Be aware of simple punctuation such as spaces, and capitalise proper nouns. 

Write Something About Learning English

I'm already a college student, but and I'll graduate in the next year. In order to find an ideal job I'm really anxious to improve my spoken english. You know I admire very much him the person [you are trying to use archaic formal English, and should have said "he" instead of "him", but it is better to say "the person"] who can say speak English fluently very much.

Recently, I attended several English classes free or charged paid for in the network and I'm very really delighted that I've learned something these days during these times. Open your mouth confidently and don't be afraid to make mistakes. Only when you reveal errors or weakness in English can your teachers and parteners take steps to help you.

I'm very glad to of your help. If you want to make frends with me or learn Mandarin, you can follow me on italki.