Introducing myself

Hi everybody!  My name is Glow and I come from Beijing. A few days ago, my cousin told me about this website and said that it would had help me with my English,  so here I am! My native language is Chinese.  If you are going to learn Chinese,let me know and we can help each other. Trust me - we can improve together. I'm an assistant manager and I have worked for one year in the auto parts industry.  I like this job.  I am a fun person to work with, a good team player, and I enjoy working with all types of people.

Good introduction, Glow!  It's good to practice your English like this.  I corrected your punctuation too, so have a look.  In English, we like shorter sentences with full stops so I recommend you do this for a while.  When you are more advanced, it would be good to learn more about using commas and other punctuation marks.  Try to remember capital letters for proper nouns, including names, languages, countries and cities.  Best wishes, Michael