Talk a bout my bad point
When I was studied in the elementary school, I'm a verysilent student, I do not often show my emotions let others know me .
When I gradually grow up, I realized one thing that's If I not contact with any one, I can't get a lot of information by them.
Because that, when I went to the university, I trying to joined more activity in the shool ,and I worked a lot of part time jobs, study while work in during the 4-year university, I collect opinions talking about me, and on the one day, my friends also say that with me, I have some more change than I was before.
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Talking About my Bad Points
When I was studied in the at elementary school, I 'm was a very silent student, I do often did not show my emotions or let others get to know me.
When I gradually grow grew up, I gradually realized one thing; that's if I do not have any contact with anyone, I can't get a lot of information by back from them.
Because that of this, when I went to the university, I tried ing to joined more activitiesy in the school, and I worked/did a lot of part time jobs. ,
study while work in during the 4-year university, I collect opinions talking about me, and on the one day, my friends also say that with me, I have some more change than I was before. (sorry I'm not quite sure what this last sentence means?) Do you mean, over my 4 years of working in my jobs and studying at university, my friends said I changed a lot?
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