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First Entry-Summer Trip My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make?? 这个夏天, 我去了新疆旅游。 我住在了喀什,我 参观了三个博物馆, 两个市场, 一些饭店。新疆的吃饭很好吃!

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First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天,我去了新疆旅游。 我住在了喀什,我参观了三个博物馆,两个市场,(和)一些饭店。新疆的吃饭(食物)很好吃!

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First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天,我去了新疆旅游。我住在了喀什,我参观了三个博物馆,两个市场和一些饭店。新疆的吃饭很好吃!

吃饭 is a verb, 饭or菜or饭菜 is a noun 

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写的很好,继续努力,下次试着多写一点
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First Entry-Summer Trip

My first notebook entry is very short; I don't know how to write or say very much in Chinese as I have just started studying it. I had a friend look over it...any other corrections to make??

这个夏天, 我去了新疆旅游。 我住在了喀什,我 参观了三个博物馆, 两个市场, 一些饭店。新疆的吃饭很好吃!

     市场和饭店 在中国我们一般不说参观市场和饭店,你可以说,逛市场,去了一些饭店


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寫得很好唷!! 寫錯了一個字!! 旅"遊" "游"泳

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