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job and respect in UK I have no idea if there is work available in England. But i am always affascinated to work in England as researcher. I like England because on the one hand the systems are good, for example: the roads, the treins, the bus and the other trasport work really nice, and, on the other hand, i love the style and the atmosphere there. I have the impression that it's really free, there is open mind and there is really respect for other people. In this sense, the England is ahead and developed so much than Italy. Of course there is racism and prejudice there too, but I think less than Italy. So this is really important because I think all people have assolutly the right to live in peaceful and respect.

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Jobs and respect in the UK

 

I have no idea if there is work available in England, but I am always I've always been affascinated fascinated to interested in working in England as a researcher.

 

["Fascinated" is not really the right word. If you want to use it, better would be: "I have no idea if there is work available in England, but I've always been fascinated by the idea of working there as a researcher]

 

I like England because, on the one hand, the systems are good ["systems" isn't too bad here, but probably "public services" are what an English person would say in this context], for example: the roads, the trains, the buses and other public transport works really well nice, and, on the other hand, I love the style and the atmosphere there. I have the impression that it's really free, there is open mind the people are open-minded, and there is really real respect for other people [OR "people really respect one another"]. In this sense, the England is ahead, and much more developed so much than Italy. Of course there is racism and prejudice there too, but I think less so than in Italy. So this is really important because I think all people absolutely have assolutly the right to live in peaceful peace and with respect.

 

Let me show you how I would write this whole paragraph if I were writing it myself:

 

I have no idea if there is work available in England, but I've always been fascinated by the idea of working there as a researcher.

 

I like England because, on the one hand, public services are good (for example public transport like trains and buses work really well, and the roads are of a high standard), and on the other hand, I love the style and the atmosphere there. I have the impression that it's really free and people are open-minded and have real respect for one another. In this sense, England is way ahead of Italy. There is racism and prejudice there too, of course, but I think less so than in Italy. This is really important because I think everybody has the right to live in peace and with respect.

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job and respect in UK

I have no idea if there is work available in England. But i have always been interested to work in England as researcher. I like England because, on the one hand the infrastructure is good, for example: the roads, the trains, the buses and the other transport systems works really well, and, on the other hand, i love the style and the atmosphere there. I have the impression that it's really free, there is a sense of open-mindedness and there is really respect for other people. In this sense, the England is ahead and has developed so much more than Italy. Of course there is racism and prejudice there too, but I think less than in Italy. This is really important because I think all people have the right to live in peaceful and respect. ( did you mean 'peace and harmony'?)

 

Your entries are so much better than mine! :-D 

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