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Today was a good day
I woke up early and I HAD HOT CAKES FOR BREAKFAST later I STARTED my Enlglish studies and (don't need I )watched a couple of moves in English. At the afternoon I WENT to practice with my new metal band :)
WE'VE been playing for a long time and I get along very well with my new partners in the band.
by the way I play the elctric guitar. THE practice ENDED AT ABOUT 8:30 pm and we HAD started at 3:00 pm it's was great. I love my new band
I had to walk A LONG WAY TO my house because I DIDN'T HAVE MONEY for a taxi lol. that's was AWFUL
Later I WENT TO MY GIRLFRIENDS HOUSE because we have a FAMILY party tomorrow.
IN FACT she is helping me to write my note.
I love my girlfriend too ^^
thanks for Reading THIS and FOR your corrections bye
Today Was a Good Day
I woke up early and I had freackfast hot cakes for breakfast. Later I started with my Enlglish studies and I watched a couple of moves in English. At In the afternoon I were practiced with my new metal band. :)
We've been playing for a long time and I get along very well with my new partners in the band.
By the way, I play the electric guitar, and the practice ended about at 8:30 pm and we started at 3:00 pm it's it was great. I love my new band.
I had to walk far to get home a lot until my house because I had not money for a taxi. lol. That's was awfull .
Later I went to were to house of my girlfriend's house because we have a family familiar party tomorrow. indeed She is helping me to write my note.
I love my girlfriend too ^^
Thanks for reading and for your corrections, bye.
Today was a good day
I woke up early and I freackfast (typo?) had hot cakes for breakfast. Later I started with my English studies homework and I watched a couple of movies in English. At In the afternoon I were went to practice with my new metal band :)
We´ve (we´ve = we have) been playing together for a long time and I get along very well with my new partners in the band.
By the way, I play the electric guitar. and The practice ends about at 8:30 pm, and we started at 3:00 pm it's and it was great. I love my new band
I had to walk a lot until long way to my house because I had not didn´t have any money for a taxi lol. That's was awfull!
Later I were to house of went to my girlfriend´s house because we have a familiar family party tomorrow.
indeed In fact she is helping me to write my note.
I love my girlfriend too ^^
thanks for Reading and your corrections bye
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