a self introducing introductory letter

dDear An,

I'm very happy to receive your letter earily. It is lovely that we can learn English together.
Fisrtly, Let me introduce myself. Being a senior student at Banking Academy, i'm trying my best to get a good job after graduation. I started learning English when i was in grade 4 (You can also say "When I was a 4th grader"). However during that period, I haven't spent all my effort on it, so i'm not very good at speaking English with foreigners. Now, I realise that English is an essential part not only in my job but also in my life. My big dream is working at foreign auditing companies, especially at Big4. Needless to say, these companies request a high English level in all 4 skills: listening, reading, speaking and writing. I have 6 months to complete most of necessary things. Therefore, English diploma is one of the first important goal that I have to achieve.
Everyday, i spend 3 hours to practice english myself. I just focus on reading, listening and writing but ignore speaking, because i haven't found a frieng to talk. So if you and i can speak English everyday, it is great for me. We can choose any topic we like to talk about, such as discussing advantages and disadvantages of spending too much time on sports, or why people don't voluntarily give up smoking.... Similarly, we can correct mistalkes in writing which is a hard part in ielts exam
i believe that this will be a strong power for us to improve english better and better

love,

A self introduction letter

Dear An,
    I'm very happy to receive your letter early. It is lovely that we can learn English together.
Fisrt, Let me introduce myself. As a senior student at Banking Academy, i'm trying my best to get a good job after graduation. I started learning English when i was at grade 4. However during that period, I haven't spent all my effort into it, so I fail in talking English with foreigners. Now, I realise that English is an essential part for not only in my job but also in my life. My big dream is working at foreign auditing companies, specifically at Big4. Needless to say, these companies request a high English level in all 4 skills: listening, reading, speaking and writing. I have 6 months to complete most of necessary things. Therefore, English diploma is one of the first important goals that I have to achieve.
Everyday, I spend 3 hours to learn english by myself. I just focus on reading, listening and writing but ignore speaking because i haven't found a foreigner to talk to. So if you and I can speak English everyday, it will be great for me. We can choose any topic we like to talk about, such as discussing advantages and disadvantages of spending too much time on sports, or why people don't voluntarily give up smoking.... Similarly, we can correct mistalkes in writing which is a hard part in Ielts exam.
I believe that this will be a strong opportunity for us to improve our english better and better .

Love,

I'm very happy to receive your letter early. It is lovely that we can learn English together.
First, let me introduce myself. Being I am a senior student at Banking Academy and I'm trying my best to get a good job after graduation.

I started learning English when I was in 4th grade. However during that time, I did not put a lot of my effort on studying English, so I have difficulty when I am talking English with foreigners.
You can say: I did not study hard when learning English.

Now, I realize that English is an essential in my job also in my life. My big dream is working at foreign auditing companies, especially at Big4. Needless to say, these companies request a high English level in all 4 skills: listening, reading, speaking, and writing.

I have 6 months to complete most of necessary things. Therefore, English diploma is one of the first important goal that I have to achieve.Everyday, I spend 3 hours to learn English on my own. I focus just on reading, listening, and writing. However, I neglected the English speaking part because I haven't found a friend to talk to/with. So if you and I can speak English everyday, it is great for me. We can choose any topic we like to talk about, such as discussing advantages and disadvantages of spending too much time on sports, or why people don't voluntarily give up smoking...Similarly, we can correct mistakes in writing which is hard part in ielts exam.

I believe that this will be a strong power for us to improve English. better and better

Love,

--your name here---

Rule number 1: Always capitalize I.  It is never lower case. 

Example: I will to the store to buy myself a soda. Then I will return home to cook food for the kids.

Rule number 2: Using commas. Always put a comma after the last listing.

Example A: I went to the store to buy myself a soda, a candy, and popcorn.

Example B: Lieu, Thanh, Ha-Vy, and I went to the store to buy candies.

a self introducing letter An Introduction Letter

Ddear An,
I'm very happy to receive your letter earily early. It is lovely that we can learn English together.
Fisrtly First , lLet me introduce myself. Being a senior student at Banking Academy, Ii'm trying my best to get a good job after graduation. I started learning English when Ii was fourth gradegrade 4. However, during that period, I haven't spent all my effort on it, so Ii'm fail in talking English with foreigners. Now, I realise that English is an essential part ,not only in my job, but also in my life. My big dream is working at foreign auditing companies (It would be better to say "My dream is to work at foreign auditing companies), especially at Big4. Needless to say, these companies request a high English level in all 4 skills: listening, reading, speaking and writing. I have 6 months to complete most of necessary things. Therefore,  (the, a, an, or my would be nice right here)English diploma is one of the first important goals that I have to achieve.
Everyday, i spend 3 hours to learn english myself ( I spend 3 hours learning English by myself). I just focus on reading, listening and writing but ignore speaking, because Ii haven't found a friengd to talk (would sound better if you said "because I do not have a friend to speak with in English). So if you and Ii can speak English everyday, it is great for me (that is great). We can choose any topic we like to talk about, such as discussing advantages and disadvantages of spending too much time on sports, or why people don't voluntarily give up smoking.... Similarly, we can correct mistalkes mistakes in writing which is a hard part in ielts? exam
i believe that this will be a strong power for us to improve in the Eenglish language. better and better

love,

(You have done a very good job writing this letter! I hope that I haven't offended you by making corrections)